Horror story

Today you are going to read our horror story. We wrote it at english class and I hope you like it.
This is our story:

"Once a upon a time, a happy family, decided to move to Twinkvillage, in Pensilvania. The only house wich was for sale. It was a big house so far from the center. They chose that house and they were living so well but one night a murder came to their house and started to kill every single member of the family. It was a tragedy and people say that there are spirits in that house.

This became into a legend and with the past of the time the house was abandoned. Twenty years later a family move to Twinkvillage because the father started to work there. There were four people in the family. John, the father, Ellie, the mother and two sons, Lindsey with thirteen years and Nathan with fifteen years. They move to the same house where the legend took place but they didn’t know anything. The sons started the school and they made some friends. At the school, their friends told them the stories about the house where they lived.

The kids didn’t belive their friends, they thought that they were kidding so they didn’t take it seriously but after the school, strange stuff started to happen. They started to scare. One nigth Nathan began to hear stange noises, saying his name. After that he dissapeared. When his parents realissed about that they called the police and they went out to find him but they didn’t find Nathan.

They come back to the hose, they were so worried. They imagine that Lindsey stayed at home, but she didn’t. She had dissapeared too. They started to shout her name around the house but there wasn’t any answer. They were frightened and they started to cry. They were going crazy. They started to looked for the sons out of the house. Later, Ellie found out a knife covered in blood, next to the entrance. The blood took them to the sons bedroom, so they opened the door and..."

We have an open final because we want that you imaagine the  finish of the story.
This is all hope you like it!